Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Character Dialogue (blogfest)

These two are characters from my current WIP.

F: Ouch.
M: Don't wanna talk about it.
F: She totally just used you.
M: Yeah, well.
F: Do you really like her?
M: Have you seen her? Of course I like her. Every guy at school likes her.
F: So all guys go for the slut look?
M: It's her party outfit. She isn't like that all the time.
F: Mmmhmm. And the fact that she just made out with you to get with that other guy...?
M: Not technically a slut.
F: But still pretty slutty. I saw them leaving together. I guess they thought the party was lame with the whole parental supervision thing.
M: You just met her tonight, you don't even know her.
F: I can't believe you're still defending her. She can't be that pretty.
M: She's Alicia Norman.
F: Oh, right, how stupid of me to forget.
F: Do you really still like her?
M: Do I still wish we were making out right now? Yeah. Do I like her?...Not really. Not anymore.


  1. Haha. Oh men! This was great. So nice of his female friend to help him move on :)

  2. Ha! He'd probably go back for seconds without even liking her. I know guys just like him!

  3. Haha like the above comment said ^^
    Really great scene! Loved it! You said so much in so few words :)
    Great job!

  4. Nice convo - loved the honesty at the end.

  5. Nice scene--and yes I feel like it was a scene even without knowing the characters names and everything, their voices were so strong. I really enjoyed this!

  6. boys are so dense!! and stubborn!
    great slice!

  7. Ha, I love male/female friendship dynamics! These two sound adorable. :)

  8. I'd love to read more about the girl he's talking about. I like how the definition of slutty changes around. :)

  9. Ohh man. Typical guy! :/ Great conversation, though!

  10. Very clever exhcange. I liked it. Your characters really shine. I am a new follower from the bloghop.

  11. Jenna, this was fabulous! I felt like I was eavesdropping on an honest to goodness real teen boy conversation :) How fun and funny!

  12. LOL! I like the banter between these two and the punchline.

  13. This was excellent! What a great conversation!

  14. I wanted you to know you are in my top 10 for this challenge :)

    1. Wow, thanks! I feel honored to be in your top 10! :D

  15. I loved the back and forth in this.

  16. Awesome.
    The guy prob will go back. Love could be quite overwhelming(I don't believe that he don't love her anymore ;P )sometimes...
    Hhmmm...and I think prob the girl(talking) kinda like him...
    Love ya blog btw!